{"id":594,"date":"2019-09-30T12:58:19","date_gmt":"2019-09-30T17:58:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/?p=594"},"modified":"2019-09-30T14:29:01","modified_gmt":"2019-09-30T19:29:01","slug":"an-agenda-aint-nothing-but-a-to-do-list","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/index.php\/2019\/09\/30\/an-agenda-aint-nothing-but-a-to-do-list\/","title":{"rendered":"An agenda ain&#8217;t nothing but a to-do list"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"300\" height=\"169\" data-attachment-id=\"595\" data-permalink=\"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/index.php\/2019\/09\/30\/an-agenda-aint-nothing-but-a-to-do-list\/untitled-goose-game-review\/\" data-orig-file=\"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review.jpg\" data-orig-size=\"1920,1080\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"untitled-goose-game-review\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-medium-file=\"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-300x169.jpg\" data-large-file=\"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-1024x576.jpg\" tabindex=\"0\" role=\"button\" src=\"https:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-300x169.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-595\" srcset=\"http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-300x169.jpg 300w, http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-768x432.jpg 768w, http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review-1024x576.jpg 1024w, http:\/\/ldinmanbooks.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/untitled-goose-game-review.jpg 1920w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><figcaption>I haven&#8217;t played a video game since 1991, but I&#8217;m tickled by the concept of a horrible goose with a to-do list.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>So my weekend was fairly productive on the housework and acquiring-new-shoes-for-the-conference fronts, but not so much on writing or blogging. Or changing the cat litter, but one can&#8217;t do <em>everything<\/em>. But one thing I have done recently is start going through <a href=\"https:\/\/www.pcwrede.com\/blog\/\">Pat Wrede&#8217;s blog<\/a> on writing; there&#8217;s some really good stuff there, and it&#8217;s given me a lot to think about.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>For one thing, Wrede put me on to Ursula Le Guin&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/dp\/B00T2414SC\/ref=nav_timeline_asin?_encoding=UTF8&amp;psc=1\">Steering the Craft<\/a>, a writer&#8217;s guide which she updated for the 21st century &#8212; ULG was lively-minded right to the end. I want to be Pat Cadigan when I grow up, and I want to be Ursula Le Guin when I grow old. Anyway, <em>Steering the Craft<\/em> is (naturally!) full of sensible advice and actual writing exercises that look salutary for a writer to do. (I mean, I haven&#8217;t done any of them yet, but they <em>do <\/em>look useful.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>For another thing, reading a blog that has a long archive is like leafing through a time capsule of the changing zeitgeist. I found a post where everyone on a panel (including Pat) was shocked when someone said brazenly that a novel should have an agenda, at least so much as to say a moral point of view. Seanan McGuire, Ann Leckie, N.K. Jemisin, Nnedi Okorafor: these authors have since then articulated even more firmly that if your very existence as a writer is itself a political act, then of course you should embrace writing stories with a specific moral point of view. After all, any story that appears to be agenda-less actually has an invisible agenda that is congruent with the predominant cultural point of view. It has plausible deniability, or at least an unthreatening premise.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I think that argument is true in the specific sense in which the new writers are using it. And I think they&#8217;ve been successful enough in changing the conversation that it&#8217;s now about whether new speculative fiction can be called &#8220;high concept&#8221; if it is <em>not <\/em>challenging to the predominant cultural point of view. And that&#8217;s a good thing, in my view. I&#8217;ve read some great books in the last five years thanks to those efforts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But that&#8217;s not what I want to get at today. I want to talk about what writing with an &#8220;agenda&#8221; is like from the writer&#8217;s point of view. Like, how does a writer actually pursue a moral point of view in a story they are writing?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In my experience, the first question is what kind of story you want to tell yourself. You have to want to tell yourself this story, or it&#8217;s no fun. I can see where writers can become sad and bitter, if the stories they want to tell themselves are stories that other people are indifferent to, or disapprove of. When I find myself sinking into a mood like that, my self-prescription is to read other people&#8217;s books, preferably ones I haven&#8217;t read already. If it lightens my mood, that&#8217;s enough; if it enriches my perspective, that&#8217;s even better. Whatever gets me back &#8212; or onward &#8212; to a place where my story is fun.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Mind you, no matter how viral your story turns out to be, any story with a specific moral point of view isn&#8217;t going to be for everyone &#8212; like Hendrick&#8217;s Gin, which puts that legend in scrolling script on every bottle: It Is Not For Everyone. (Then they came up with another infusion that&#8217;s even more Not For Everyone than the original, which might be a bridge too far, but I haven&#8217;t tasted it yet, so I withhold judgment. And anyway I doubt Hendrick&#8217;s is complaining about their sales volume. But I digress.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Example: back in the day when I was a floating library assistant (insofar as a Geo Storm hatchback could be said to float around Tulsa County library to library), I had a conversation with a branch librarian that appalled me to my core. We were talking about displaying favorite books, and she started gushing about Thomas Hardy. &#8220;I mean, the way he writes, it&#8217;s just the way life <em>is<\/em>!&#8221; she said. Now, I had had to read <em>Tess of the D&#8217;Urbervilles<\/em> for my Victorian survey class, and to me it was the epitome of everything I hated in a story: a hapless protagonist whose every effort to get out of a tar pit only mires them in further, a dim view of human capacity, a cynical view of God and\/or spiritual enrichment, and a narrating voice that can well afford to stand afar off, aloof if not sneering altogether.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I can&#8217;t remember if I actually bit my tongue or if I answered her out loud: &#8220;God, I hope not!&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Nowadays, if (God forbid) I should ever be forced to teach <em>Tess <\/em>to a class of unsuspecting undergraduates, I would pair it with T. C. Boyle&#8217;s <em>The Tortilla Curtain<\/em>. Yes, double the misery, I know. But reading the Boyle book showed me something I hadn&#8217;t picked up about <em>Tess<\/em>, even in a university setting: which is that Hardy was doing all those things <em>on purpose<\/em>, not because he was a miserable man with a miserable point of view, but because he wanted to subject his readership to a scathing parable about their complacent condemnation of the marginalized people among them. I don&#8217;t know any Victorian middle-class snobs; but I do know plenty of white liberals. I get the value of these novels as parables &#8212; and there&#8217;s something to be said for a book&#8217;s power if it could make me react so strongly 100 years later.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But. I still don&#8217;t want to tell myself a story like this. Hardy and Boyle obviously found some fun in it; but I think in large part it&#8217;s because they could afford to. You have to be placed just so if you want to afflict the comfortable without also comforting the afflicted.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And that brings me to the point I wanted to make. So often when people take against the idea of writing with an &#8220;agenda,&#8221; the complaint is that the book is too &#8220;preachy.&#8221; But I say: show me a person who thinks a story can&#8217;t present a moral point of view without turning into (ugh) a sermon &#8212; and I&#8217;ll show you someone who hasn&#8217;t heard a good sermon. It&#8217;s not their fault; good preaching is hard to find, generally speaking. I&#8217;m lucky: I gained a lay preaching license because I had some truly gifted mentors. I learned that a sermon combines the art of academic argument with the art of storytelling. A good sermon does five things: 1) it is about one topic and has a beginning, a middle, and an end; 2) it does not read things into its text but draws them out; 3) it is relevant for the people it is addressed to; 4) it gives the listener something to chew on on more than one level &#8212; intellectual, emotional, spiritual, imaginative, or all of these; and finally 5) it&#8217;s given by someone who knows when to be confrontational and when not. It&#8217;s a delicate art.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Like writing a novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So what kind of story do I want to tell myself? What sermon do I need to hear? I want a story with eucatastrophe built into it, obviously; with characters who are innocent as doves or cunning as snakes or both together; where everyone is essential to the resolution of the crisis, or at least significant in it; where people get along with the others or find a way to work with those they don&#8217;t; where suffering isn&#8217;t a cheapskate play for meaning; where heroes don&#8217;t punch down; whose plot doesn&#8217;t take for granted the punishment of women for laying claim to significance; where friendship is a driving force; where agency rather than fate is the moral imperative; where redemption is earned and grace bestowed, instead of the other way around.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Now that sounds an awful lot like an arduous checklist, but when I&#8217;m making up a story, I don&#8217;t proceed by ticking boxes. It&#8217;s more like I&#8217;m hanging on the refrigerator door figuring out what to make for dinner. Ooh, I have an onion, I could make this; won&#8217;t make that till I buy some lemons. But of course I&#8217;m the one who stocked the fridge in the first place.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>There&#8217;s a lot of work between that moment and the moment I have people over. But then there will be wine. Or gin.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So my weekend was fairly productive on the housework and acquiring-new-shoes-for-the-conference fronts, but not so much on writing or blogging. Or changing the cat litter, but one can&#8217;t do everything. 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